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Writing Dialogue

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Making Characters Talk


Dialogue Serves Multiple Purposes



  • Reveals character personality and relationships

  • Advances the plot through information exchange

  • Creates tension and conflict between characters

  • Breaks up narrative prose and increases pacing


Writing Natural Dialogue



  • Listen to real speech but edit out the "ums" and repetitions

  • Each character should sound distinct—vocabulary, sentence length, speech patterns

  • Use subtext: What characters don't say is as important as what they do

  • Avoid exposition dumps: Don't have characters explain things they would already know

  • "Said" is invisible: Use "said" and "asked" most of the time. Fancy alternatives ("exclaimed," "retorted") draw attention away from the dialogue itself